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“Your script has real market potential. The story is practically poetry in its visual storytelling. You do skate on the edge of being deliberately mysterious – a little like David Mamet. Your sense of visual action and visual storytelling is some of the best I’ve seen, ever.”
“A very unique thriller with its own distinctive style. The tone of the piece reminded me very much of BLACK SWAN but with a more coherent and enjoyable story. You tell a good story with a very original method and style.”
“Ms. Vaughn’s writing is very skilled dealing with complex feelings, the characters and dialogue are excellent…the atmospheric elements are beautiful… Ms. Vaughn is not afraid to go the dark places of the human psyche…a story we haven’t seen before.”
“Ms. Vaughn is one of the most visual writers I’ve ever worked with. Ms. Vaughn certainly doesn’t spoon-feed her readers or audience.”
“Your voice as a writer is quite strong, and it gives us something fresh. You sound different, special, and a treat in a drab world of generic scripts. I think you have something special here.”
“The plot of the story is very unique and engaging to the audience. The structure is well done, giving an incredible opening sequence to set up the world. The dialogue is one of the best aspects of the story. This is a very unique concept and unlike many stories an audience has seen before. It has high market potential as the story covers many plotlines and arcs throughout. It is relevant to events happening today and speaks of what the future may or not bring when trying to achieve a better tomorrow.
“The writer does a wonderful job with presenting the story in a very visual way. Throw in varied language and syntax and the action was often as entertaining as the scintillating dialogue. Again, there’s personality and it makes the script fun.”